This piece was so beautiful. Gorgeous, outstanding, elegant. Are just a few words to describe how much I enjoyed reading this. The imagery portrayed so very vivid and painted such a perfect picture into my mind. Well done on creating such a sweet piece. ~Mel
Short and beautiful in content, capturing moments like reflections of nature in word form..........very beautiful in her form....
showing imagery of the seasons and the moods it brings.......somehow it unfolds...
"The tree sighed, embracing the night
Gold leaf memories
Into Autumn's barren prelude
To a Winter kiss....mmmmmmm
seems to hold another song
I simply adore nature poems, they scream out to the very essence of our humanity.
Your word choice and placement in this piece beggar belief, I would not normally place a quote from a poem into a comment but ...
"Scattering Summer scented dreams
Into Autumn's barren prelude"
Absolutely adorable! Everything about this couplet sums this piece up beautifully for me. You have the wonderfully vivid imagery coupled with perfectly hand crafted words...With a little sprinkling of alliteration on top as an added extra.
This poem appeals to the naturalistic side of any person.