Comments : Memories Of A Tree

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wwhat a beautiful piece you have penned. I can feel everything your tree feels. You have brought this piece of nature to life.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This piece was so beautiful. Gorgeous, outstanding, elegant. Are just a few words to describe how much I enjoyed reading this. The imagery portrayed so very vivid and painted such a perfect picture into my mind. Well done on creating such a sweet piece. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This was a beautiful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "The tree sighed, embracing the night
    Gold leaf memories
    Loosed their tenacious hold"

    The poem as a whole was beautiful, but these lines were the best to me! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by iluvbradley

    WOw!! I wish that I could write nature poems like that. I never know where to start.

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Short and beautiful in content, capturing moments like reflections of nature in word form..........very beautiful in her form....
    showing imagery of the seasons and the moods it brings.......somehow it unfolds...
    "The tree sighed, embracing the night
    Gold leaf memories

    Into Autumn's barren prelude
    To a Winter kiss....mmmmmmm
    seems to hold another song

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    I simply adore nature poems, they scream out to the very essence of our humanity.

    Your word choice and placement in this piece beggar belief, I would not normally place a quote from a poem into a comment but ...

    "Scattering Summer scented dreams
    Into Autumn's barren prelude"

    Absolutely adorable! Everything about this couplet sums this piece up beautifully for me. You have the wonderfully vivid imagery coupled with perfectly hand crafted words...With a little sprinkling of alliteration on top as an added extra.

    This poem appeals to the naturalistic side of any person.

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