You perfectly and peacefully describe life.. the simple picture of life that we sometimes ignore. short but true.. great work!!

That was diffrent..... I like your style the word choice is simple but effective, the emotion is pure and raw, the flow was flawless, the imagery was clear, and the message peaceful 5/5

This poem was good. i felt it was kinda forced though. i rated this a 5

It was wonderful. It summed up life in very few words, but each word had its own feeling. I think it was breath taking. It was seriously excellent. Great job, keep it up.

~Mo~

Naw I liked this poem very much ^.^ Some how it just warms me up...
5/5 keep up the good work, kay? xoxo

This is beautiful..despite being relatively short you managed to pack in so much depth and emotion.

The imagery you created was beautifully done, it painted very vivid pictures in my mind.

I found this to be beautifully written with an insanely great message behind the written words.

Wow that wuz great!!
i loved it
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5/5