Oh my far way friend

by gurbatt   Oct 11, 2007


Oh my far away friend , I know you have a desire to see me
And you know I have the same desire, what is the way?
what is the way to aproach you?
Keep the memories of our time we had spent
keep the mind full of the jokes I told you
I remember your jokes while you were telling me about the goat.
The goat one was funny but deep in meanings
haha do you remember that?
i hope you do , when i come tomorrow please remind me again
have fun, and much much fun

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nula

    Nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Nina

    Hey this is nina
    thanx for you comment, like your poems get
    all translated so i can read some more. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Well yeah i would like to mention some of grammatical mistake in your poem to help you improve your translation:-)
    First line
    it should be " a desire" rather than " desire"
    Third line
    Approach not aproach
    fifth line
    I told you rather than I have told you
    last line
    much much fun rather than many many

    bro you need to improve your english
    I guess you can
    keep writing
    best of luck
    4/5 for the poem
    tc

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