This is a really good poem. The rhyming was wonderful and the wording was great. This really is a wonderful poem. 5/5

Kalee

Short and sweet. just a suggestion. try making sure you grammer and capitalisation is correct when posting poetry because it just looks more appealing. Yet still a lovely read. well done xoxo

Short and Sweet but very well written...the emotions were powerful as along w/ the message...wonderful hun! keep up the great work!!!

Nice poem... The rythm was very nice... The emotion also strong and powerful.. The flow was good and steady.. Well done.. 5/5

The word choice was simple yet effective, the first stanza is my favorite, the flow was great, and the emotion is deep. I am not really into love poems, but this one kept my intrest. 5/5

Well written poem with simple but effective wordings and a good flow ofcourse :)

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Fsams

My fav lines

i love you,
you need to say.
say it please,
so i can be happy for another day

Really nice poem. I really like it. 5/5

Keep writin

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"its your voice,
the calm tone.
its what i need,
to leave you alone."

This was a brilliant part of the poem, excellent job!

I can relate to this poem in a way. Hearing those 3 simple words I love you mean so much and they are what keep me strong coming from my boyfriends heart, without them I don't know how I'd end up feeling. This was such an enjoyable read. Beautifully sad I must say. Simple effective and stunning. Well done. loved it. Of course a 5/5 from me because you touched my heart. ~Mel