Forever Me And You.

by BlessedByAnAngel   Oct 12, 2007


I couldn't breathe if i lost you,
I wouldn't go on without you here,
I'd give up on life if it happened,
Cos you're my one true love my dear.

I know that i can treat you right,
Better then any other man could,
I have a heart as big as a mountain,
Giving you love and support i would.

Whenever you need a shoulder,
Or just need a hand to hold,
No matter what time of day,
I'll be keeping you warm in the cold.

I really cant explain my love for you,
Its a never ending railroad track,
You're the only woman I'll ever need,
And I'll make sure your heart will never crack.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "Whenever you need a shoulder,
    Or just need a hand to hold,
    No matter what time of day,
    I'll be there keeping you warm in the cold."

    The only thing i'd change is the last line of that stanza to simply, "I'll be keeping you warm in the cold." The flow faltered a bit and that would keep it consistant.

    But apart from that, such a beautiful love poem, really made me smile =)
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

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