Aw. That was really good. I really loved it! It expressed so many feelings. great job!

~Mo~

Good!

Ok, for this one, I can see emotion and such effort on it, bit I notice that some thoughts is really missing, but the entire piece is great! Very descriptive write!

Keep it up!

This shows how you really feel, which is the most important part of poetry. I'm sure a lot of people could relate, as can I. A good write. :]

Tammie