This was really such a sweet piece, I loved the emotions which you portrayed into this. They were deep and really touching. A heartfelt piece you have here which really expresses you love for someone who i'm sure would mean the world to you. Well done. Loved it. ~Mel

I can relate. Good poem.

This is so beautiful and filled with greatly described feelings. Every line holds so much emotions.
Truly beautiful and sweet love poem. I like the ending, because the rhythm of the poem slows down in last few lines which adds great effect to the whole piece.
Keep writing!

Wow
I like the way you express your self in this
poem...I can relate to how you feel.

Tracy this piece is absolutely beautiful!
It is short but it has incredible rhythm and you truly put your self in it. You described so many emotions on the truly fantastic way.
Well done!

Sweeet poemm.. ilike the ending.. its really sweett.. kissiing gudnite..hehe..

So Chui Man ;D