Wow that was amazing its going into my favs....beautiful job 5/5

"Midnight hours, silent as dead
Teenage girl wants to be dead"
Maybe you could find a different word to rhyme "dead" with. Rhyming a word with itself is annoying in my opinion.

"Midnight hours, silent as dead
A creek near by is stained in red"
I loved that line! It painted such a vividly sad picture.

I really like the "little angel." It made the poem sound so sweet and it made it that much more sad. I really enjoyed reading this poem! Excellent job!

~Morgan~