Comments : It's a Secret

  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    I love this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by someone

    Aww, this was such a cute poem! i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Caitlin Scharff

    This poem reminds me of the way I feel about my guy. LOL It was really good and remindes me of how I write my poems. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This poem is so simple, yet incredible... Where to begin on the praise??

    "You have a strength
    I wish was mine
    An inner power
    I want to find"

    I loved this stanza because it shows how much you admire this person. It is just amazing how much you look up to him/her.

    "You're my hero
    And you don't know.
    It's a secret
    I've yet to show."

    This stanza can be related to anyone reading this poem. Lots of people love someone, but keep it locked up inside.. I think you should let it out... let this person know how much you care for him/her.

    "It's funny how
    I feel this way
    You caused my heart
    And mind to sway."

    This is probably my favourite stanza out of the entire poem. I love it so much because it relates to me 100%. My boyfriend makes me feel this way everyday, and I love it!

    Great poem, keep it up.. can't wait to read more!