Great poem! you have captured a rare feeling.... Loving It!

Niceee poemm!!!!!!!

Great job!...I had someone in mind the entire time!...It perfect...I love it.. <3 =]

WOW this poem is like really good. you have great talent. Keep writing

This is very good and deep, even better considering english may not be your 1st language. comment back pls :)

For this to be your first poem its a good one my favor part was""You walked into my Life, when my world was dark and cold,
you held out your arms, and my heart and soul you did hold."" that is so sweet keep writing not many people can do gd long poems but you did so keep writing hope to see more of you!!!....=)

This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo

This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo