Heart Ache (Senryu)

by Shad0w0faPh30n1x   Oct 15, 2007


Heart Ache (Senryu)

Heart ache still lingers,
Pain will never go away,
Now I fade slowly.

Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    I like the idea of this poem but i think it would come to gether more if it was 'slowly fade' istead of 'fade slowly' but what do i know your the first comment ive left in two years lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Lovely keep it up your really great
    5/5
    polaroid

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