Wow powerful words
keep it up!
-Lisa

Its relle sweet.. but try and widen your vocabularly =)

Hmm.. well if this is your first poem, it's pretty good. The comment from the person above me is right, you should try to widen your vocab and try to flow your words a bit better. The emotion is there though, which is a good start. Keep trying and you will improve. :]

Cute poem!!!

Wow verry well writenb it kept me intrested

Sweet poem =)

Beautiful

Rlly good keep writing kk :)

This is so sweet! whoever that girl is is very lucky to have someone as sweet as you to write stuff to her.... :)

~bekka baby

Wow tht was really sweet im a new poet too

*anna*

Full of heart on it... i like it... 5/5

Wow.
thats really good
i really liked it
good job
keep it up

Omg, so romantic.

Very emotional, too.

Maybe guys CAN express feelings...
Just kidding hehe
Great piece once again D.
5/5.