Comments : Making love

  • 16 years ago

    by AlyssaBrook

    This was really good!
    I liked how you made it sound passionate, rather than making the guy be a perverted, sex-addict. Great work!
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awwww, this is very good poem by you. I loved reading it, it has a lot of passion in it!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Mrs Sparrow

    I loved it! Now all flushed!

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Depressed

    I loved it, well-written!!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Whoa!!! nice one..

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikoshiana

    Gosh jason, lol.... Wonderful poem xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    Phew! Love it, such passion. I feel all flushed lol

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    Wow!!! is all I can say.My feeling a little warm can't be because of the heating cos it ain't on.