That is so sad. It painted a really vivid and sad image in my head. I loved how smoothly it was written. Great job! Keep it up!

~Mo~

Very good writen piece!
Fantastic emotion!

Danielle
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Keep it up!!

WOOOW, very sad yet very beautiful poem, i can relate to it...
well done, i can tell its one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read in this section...
i hope you will find your true friend soon...

Who is that girl, i am gonna kill her only for your eyes my friend