Well I liked it. It is a great metaphor because it's soooo true. 5/5 even though it didn't flow as well as it could have for me.

That Was Awesome,, So Unique To All Other Poemz I Have Read But I Really Like It..
Keep It Up
perfectlyBROKEN xx 5/5

This is a funny poem
i liked how u made love relate to food
i really liked it
good job
i give it a 5!

Yeah this is still about love...lol..love makes you die inside a little more each time you feel it happen and know it's lost-good work..a lil different,but good. Keep it up!:)

I really like this...so wierd...but great to read!
&& true as well.
wow..this is really really good!
xxxx

Lol that was funny