Now this, is extra super cool, worked well in every aspect, it has that same diverse style as some of your others that i like a lot, and this one flowed REALLY well...HELL YEAH....

This was kind of creepy, but you show plenty of effort and clarity. 5/5

I like u get right to the facts:)

Guilt
glows goosebumps.

Love them lines. You started this off really strong and ended really strong.. The flow of this was perfect, spot on and I couldn't find any flaws within any of your pieces. You definitly interest me with your work.

5/5 ~Mel

Wow..this was such a strong poem. I love your style..i would have liked it more if you kept the two line thing gong. But I felt it was still powerful and well written. Keep it up. Shanik