I have lost you to the world

by paul alexander   Oct 18, 2007


What will i do now
what will i have now
when will we be back
when will you love me

why must i feel this way
why must you feel not like me
when will you come back
when will you love me
how are you feeling now
do you even think of me

what will i do now
what do i have
you will never come back
you will never love me again

i have lost you to the world
i lost my only girl.......

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  • 16 years ago

    by AhoudRanger

    Dude this is really KEWL !!!
    i loved it ! heres 5/5 :)
    and yo !! ty for the comment :)

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Tons of questions that run through many people's mind. Normally I wouldn't like this style, but since it is on something so easy to relate to, I enjoyed it. It has a fast pace to it and that's perfect for this poem because these thoughts RUSH through your mind, one after another. Good job!
    *ME*

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