I love u

by Nina   Oct 19, 2007


The day was cold
but to me it was the hottest day
the sky was dark
gentle rain was falling
but to me the sun was shining
because your love is like an umbrella
protects me from the storm
like a sweater
it keeps me warm
your love shine through the rain
because your love beats the weather.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    A lovely read Nina!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Phil

    Very nice nina 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Very good try. In fact I'd like 2 say something 2 u that there's no bad poem 4 it expresses one's emotions, The difference that some people have the ability 2 express it better than others, however that doesn't mean that the others are bad. Keep up & best wishes...

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