Thats so sweet

Awww 5/5
that's sooo sweet and honest, i liked it a lot!!!

Impressiveeeee. :)

5/5
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I really loved this! It flowed great! Just all around fantastic!

I think you should make the lines longer and/or more elaborate. you're rhymes make sense, but personally, and this is just me, i dont like the alternating rhyme scheme, it makes them seem a little too spaced out and sometimes they got lost in the rhythm. dont get me wrong, it was NOT a bad poem, but we can all use some improvement =)

Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

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This is a very good poem. I felt the feeling. or you could just be good at writting and just decided to throw this on the site. lol. well, loved the poem, hope you read mine, lol, poetry knight