Comments : Tell Me (Maybe)

  • 16 years ago

    by country girl

    Thats so sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Awww 5/5
    that's sooo sweet and honest, i liked it a lot!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by babyPB

    Impressiveeeee. :)

    5/5
    -- if u might have some time,
    kindly check out my poems too.
    [ id really appreciate it ]

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I really loved this! It flowed great! Just all around fantastic!

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    I think you should make the lines longer and/or more elaborate. you're rhymes make sense, but personally, and this is just me, i dont like the alternating rhyme scheme, it makes them seem a little too spaced out and sometimes they got lost in the rhythm. dont get me wrong, it was NOT a bad poem, but we can all use some improvement =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

    -xx-

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    This is a very good poem. I felt the feeling. or you could just be good at writting and just decided to throw this on the site. lol. well, loved the poem, hope you read mine, lol, poetry knight