Powerful and I like how you don't use rhymeing to create that power. A poem is anything that stirs an emotion and ur poems do that, deffinetly. Great Write, Keep it up! 5/5

Awesome cy! i think this is one of your best! i like the personification of addiction. you've done so well here! i love this!!

Love it ... =)

My friend you work is natural and speaks loud and clear, just beautiful from the heart.

Wow i really like this one

Hey Cy! GREAT one, as usual !!! Just moved and got my own computer now! W/22in monitor! So now I can write more often!
Thinkin bout u 2! I'm still clean. So far so good. Talk 2 u soon!

Hey Cy

Really great poem I love it!

5/5

I like this one, it made me kinda sad though

I was like DANG!!!! When I read this. I can almost visualize this conversation taking place in the mind. I got chills from this. I'm not related to drugs but I have been addicted to sex. good stuff

This is a really great poem. it really explains why its as easy to stop an addiction. everybody thinks its just a peice of cake but they really don't know how hard it truely is. GREAT POEM!

<3 Angie :P

This made me cry. ive been down the road of addiction and it took 2 1/2 years away from my life. I read your profile. and i wish you the best of luck. it is not easy what you are going through, but you are not alone. and if you ever need any advice, or just someone to talk to, i am here.
you take care.
and keep writing.
5/5

Wow that totally sums up addiction. No need to say no more. keep the fight up my man you will get there in the end, and when your winning think of your daughters to keep you winning

Wow, there really aren't other words for it.
I love it.

I think alot of people can relate to this poem. whether its drugs, sex, tv, ect. I think everyone is struggling with an addiction. you did a wonderous job!

Fricking wonderful!!

Wonderful job on this one! 5/5

So simple but yet so effective. I believe you have captured the insecurities that lie within and addiction and the emotional will power it takes to say enough!! Brilliant. I really liked it. It's real and completely heart felt. No psychologist or doctor could describe addiction better! Well done.

Omg I loved this!!! and i know the feeling of addiction. 5/5

Wow, that was amazing! I could relate to it so much! well done and keep up the good work!

Dang, well that sucks. i hope u get better! and it was kinda creepy.....i liked it ^_^
anywho u deserve a 5

~tia