Yikes!!!!! this is good! :)

you are so fun to write with, Tim! Glad I made ya do it tonight, who'da thought we had this hiding inside!

Great work!!!

Excellent collab, you two did equally great job. Whole poem is filled with superbly expressed feelings and truly great descriptions that created unique and captivating atmosphere.
Truly beautiful, from the beginning to the end.
5/5

This was truely beautiful. Such a great Collab you two have written here. Your work well together. Such a sweetly written piece you have. Emotional impact. I loved the word choice nice and cute. Overall a great poem! Keep it up~Mel

Great topic. I love the rebutle-ish flow, it gives it a great speed and excitement.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

I really love this poem<3

You two did an awesome job - I love this. I think so many of us can relate to it...it many different ways! P&Q has offered many friends that I wish I could know! This was so awesome and honestly when I seen that it was a callab it surprised me...I never would have guessed as it flowed so perfectly!
Hope you are doing well and I am looking forward to some new work ;) Take care!