I don't know how old you are. But this poem has the emotion that an adult could never understand. I'm a 16 year old girl. Reading what you wrote put all of my emotions and feelings tword my father into words. I've been through hell with my father, I write poems to express my feelings but I could never come up with anything to explain the pain he's put me through. Honestly, I cried. This is absolutly amazing. And I hope you don't mind, but I printed this out and gave it to my father. I didn't take credit for it at all, but I told him that someone had finally written something that could slightly explain what he's done. He read it and had nothing to say. I know that he wasn't reading "my" words, but I was finally able to make him feel an ounce of the hurt that I've felt my life. I hope you don't think this is wierd or creepy in ANY way, this poem toched my heart very deeply. Thank You.