Comments : Silly Girls & Stupid Boys

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparrow

    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem is awesome! It reminds me so much of me being a silly girl falling for a stupid boy and always getting hurt. WOW

  • 12 years ago

    by ReinaPuente

    Ahhh-mazing very true me and my best friend can relate to this, but this is more like her!

  • 11 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    I hate how you got two such simple comments on such a good poem. So i'm here to take care of that.

    It's a sad poem yet it is touching all the same as well. You had a way of taking what seemed a simple teenage heartbreak and putting the details down to fill it in. To show how it really was. The form in this was iffy but everything else made up for that. I have a soft spot for this poem seeing as the reader can relate so easily to it. You did an excellent job of not making it TOO personal so that other people can look at it and think.. "I've been through this."

    I was fond of the ending. It went together well, the rhyme and the length and everything. It really tied the entire poem together and I think that that was my favorite part, actually. You did really really well with all of this and I will get to reading more, I can assure you. I really was happy to read this.. Even if it isnt my usual style.