Aww.... its so sad....but very well written and flowd nicely.....did a good job! 5/5

That was sad but you did good. Keep up the good work.

O.O i love it good job.

WOW! I LOVE THIS POEM IT EFFIN ROCKS!
GREAT WORK! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. By the way my fave color is black too and I like woves. LOL.

Awsum poem,hope its not true

Hi if this is true im sorry but you have a way with words this poem is great but sad

Wow that is really amazing i love that poem

This is a amazinn poem- shows allot of emotion...

That is an amazing poem, wow

That's horrible-the story. The poem was fine...the flow was a little rough.