Comments : The Wanderings Of Romeo

  • 16 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    As the saying goes "some of the best poems are short" and this is exactly what it is. very well done the first stanza was the best. by the way are you a shakesphere fan? other than that great job
    Take Care
    xHSx

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    What a unique poem! I really enjoy that you thought outside the conventional box here. My favorite line was "four crocodile tears will fall from his eyes"--such great imagery!

    5/5, props!

    ~queenofspades~