There is no name to this one..

by Roxie   Oct 22, 2007


I can't believe it,
My wish finaly came true,
I can't believe we almost split,
I thought i was going to be feelings blue,
But you came back to me,
And know I feel like I am finaly free,
It's so good to finaly get out of what was blocking me ths hole time!
I didn't know i was trapped in love,
But know i do and i know i am free.

This poem might not make sense to you but remember that i am only 12 years old and that i am just begining to write poems. My great grandpa used to write poems but he died. He left without saying goodbye, but now i know that he is always watching me! but i really want to write poems like him so if ou can give me advice please help me!! my address is riding_waves_not_rays@hotmail.com, thank you

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  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    I agree with Zeenat. More words can completely transform the entire outcome of the poem. And remember, not all poetry must rhyme. Try using more 'meaningful' words, you know? Deeper, with more emotion = bigger impact. :) Hope all goes well for you.

    Ally. x

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