Intense! Very much so! If you're looking for any type of suggestion, if you made it flow a little more (like equal syllobals) the meaning and intensity of your emotion would come out even more!!!

Powerfully apathetic, short but meaningful, pratically bleeding feeling in every line. Some rhymes seemed a bit forced but all in all an interesting write. Left me wondering...5/5

I liked this poem. There was a mistake in the first stanza. It would look better if you fixed it. Great job though.

4/5

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