Why him

by Karly   Oct 23, 2007


Why him
how can it be,
the boy i was ova
but, never will be
as days pass,
i wonder,
how could this be?
the boy i was ova n was ova me.
is their still feelings that we hide,
or is it the start of MORE lies.?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I like it!!! This is good and there are no such things as errors in poetry the errors are what makes it special and yours don't ever change it Keep it original keep on writing I cant wait to hear more Comment some off mine to Bridgette

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Good poem, but like the other one, fix the errors.

    Great job

    4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

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