Mixing me up

by Cherish   Oct 23, 2007


I remember all the things you said,
Mixing up my brain, going round my head.
Everything was perfect,baby i loved you so,
so tell me now and tell me true, why did you have to go?!
I was always here waiting ready to give it to you..
so no matter where or no matter when, you will always be my boo.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    One thing darling; Capitalize your I's.

    Other than that it was flawless. A bit short, but that's just fine. The emotion was quite good, actually very good with a short poem. The flow was amazing. (: And, your word choice was amazing as well, hun.

    Keep it up.
    5|5 on this one! (:

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