Awwwww omg this made me me cry..... im crying rite now.... omg this is soooo gud... omg publish this mate .... this is sooo good... omg..

baby XD

Wow this is such a beautiful poem. Loved the lines and the emotions are flowing over like a river. Gone forever......such a grief...:(

Wow this is such a beautiful poem. Loved the lines and the emotions are flowing over like a river. Gone forever......such a grief...:(

Wow this is such a beautiful poem. Loved the lines and the emotions are flowing over like a river. Gone forever......such a grief...:(

Haha, just thought id comment.. and im not trying to be a smart ass.. but if your with jesus...you shouldnt be crying. [:

Uhm, its an alright poem.. nice flow. and kudos to you for being able to rhyme. i always sound pathetic when i try..

Haha, i can totally relate to this.. and the first one.
kaitlyn.

They say a true love will never die no matter how much time passes. But I say if you truly love her as much as your poems portray, you should never kill your self and just live life happy you experienced this true love because most people never get the chance.. great job