Comments : The dark Streets

  • 12 years ago

    by Stephanie

    The confusion and rythem of this poem is so real! good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Pete

    How much do those streets remind you of the areas we live in bro?

    Very nice creepy poem, I must tell you .. I much prefer your work when it's put into the standard 4 line stanzas. Seems to flow much better.

    Really like this poem mate, it's eerily enjoyable.

    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 12 years ago

    by supratim

    A beautifully depicted mysticism reflects from this poem!! Really a nice job.

    5/5
    Take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by sarah

    Your good.
    and im not sure if my paragraph thing was a poem...
    but if i write whatever i did... (something else of course)

    would you fix it if it wasnt good and give it back to me?
    just tell me whats wrong with it or whatever
    or change it

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    Very creepy but excellent poem, loved the way it flowed