Comments : The best of lifes promises

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Thats sweet,
    might send along too best friend,
    and give u the credit u deserve for it too.
    =]
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    I think this is a simple and beautiful poem of love and devotion to god, good job. in answer to your poem comment, i have heard that meat loaf song but it wasn't connected to this poem but maybe a few others. good point though. comment more sometime, i like your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I really like this poem about friendship, well done. I also treasure my friends in my life... They also helped me grew up to who I am now...

    Anyway It was a great poem. Well done.
    You have one minor error though.
    your a promise from (god),
    = God :)