I like this one the best....
but wat do u mean u think i dnt care???
uh thts bull n u kno it.
but w.e.

Great emotion..i really like it...good stuff...5/5

Sad poem yet I loved it. I remember feeling like this before. Good job.

5/5

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Sad poem....really good job on this....full of sadness and pain....Keep up the good work with your poems! 5/5

I absolutely loved this, it was amazing,
the way you actually put your words
together is simply amazing, although
you use simple words it is still a great
piece. nice work 5/5

Your the only one for me,

I wish we could go somewhere to be free.

I tend to be full of hate,

And because of that its closed many of my gates.

i loved those lines ^^^^

Excellent poem. i can relate to every stanza. 5/5

Wow another great poem! i liked it alot and ik how it feels to loose sum one you love so much! but in the end it worked out between me and him so hopefully it will with u and that girl!!!

<3 i love you silly

This was a really amazing poem! You word choice was really great, even though it was simple. It was very relatable! The flow was great! I could just feel the emotions jumping out of the screen! You are a really talented writer! Great job!

Cayce xx