Love the flow and the imagery, and some nice words. Great poem =)

5/5

A bit morbid, but beautifully written never-the-less. this seems to embody everything that i would consider painful. when i try and picture how you must have felt to be compelled to write something like this is beyond me, but it is very well done.

~Ben

I love all of your poetry.
he ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

Beautiful, gracelfull, overall astounding

Amazing imagery! And great flow!

Brilliantly written!

Holy crap! Your word choice is absolutely impeccable! You have a wonderful way of showing how truly talented you are. The flow of this poem is wonderful. Its unique and it shows truly who you are. It takes the reader on a journey into a different world. Love it. 5/5

Beautifully written poem. I like the words "Ice Consumes the heart"
Strong

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