Comments : Cackling and Snickering

  • 11 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    I couldnt take the real real aim behind the poem, I wil make sure to reread but I would like to tell u that ur word choice was good, ..only few changes would make it PERFECT...the way u lined up the words..


  • 11 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    So, didja?

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    To be able to 'rip time into shreds' would be something , wouldn't it?
    I love this - it's formatted really well and there is a quirkiness to it which is charming.

    Take care

    • 2 years ago

      by abracadabra

      Oh my goodness, I'd forgotten about this old poem. Thank you, Ben! It takes a certain someone to find this poem charming.