Comments : Half a Breath

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "I wish that I wasn't so empty
    So different, than what I was"

    I can relate to this. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    I really enjoyed this poem.
    your emotions are well said. and i can understand clearly. you expressed them quite well.
    great work.
    -alicia

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Enyjoeyed poem been here alot. 5/5