Hey bryan,
I love you poem, the flow good as well as the rhyming, you did a nice job in expressing your feelings. an excellent poem, I love the first stanza. 5/5
kisses stephanie

Bryan
I love Sonnets. You did a excellent job on this sad piece. The sadness really comes through in your words.
Great Job!
Take Care Cindy

Such a beautiful piece. Honesty it took my breathe away. You always write the most gorgeous love poems. Amazing. ~Mel