Submission

by xXBrokenXx   Oct 27, 2007


Your moist, warm breath upon my skin
Ignites a pulsing flame within.
Words can't describe the burn I feel.
My world is false, but you are real.
One lasting taste, one fatal kiss.
Will leave me in eternal bliss.
You know your power over me,
So why prolong my misery?
I can't withstand you're deadly lure.
My life is yours. Of that I'm sure.
So when you choose to seal my fate,
It will be worth the grueling wait.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Wow! such a great poem, i love it 5/5
    had a great flow to it and i loved how u worded it! great work hun!
    xx love

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Wow! such a great poem, i love it 5/5
    had a great flow to it and i loved how u worded it! great work hun!
    xx love

  • 16 years ago

    by CoUrTnEy

    Holy crap!! haha that was amazing! it was very easy to read, and i know exactly how you feel! keep writing cuz i sure wanna read

    courtney 5/5

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