Red Eyes

by Isabella   Oct 28, 2007


Every night when the light is out
When I am all alone
With no one to hold
Your red eyes linger in the dark

I know that you are here now
Watching every step I take
Waiting for me to notice
Your red eyes linger in the dark

Waiting for the moment my faith disappear
Attack me now you do
Last thing I ever see
Your red eyes linger in the dark

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  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    You poem scares me to the bone. I have felt that.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    The repetition made great effect, adding very powerful tone to the whole piece. it is short yet so effective. I like a lot the haunting imagery that you created and dark atmosphere that fills whole poem.
    Keep writing!