Wow, you left me without words... Honestly I love this piece, so deep and sadly true. You wrote it on truly amazing way, it is so sad, ending is so effective and atmosphere that you created in whole piece is excellent, really touching too. I felt message of this poem strongly, you should be proud on her self because you wrote it. Well done!

This poem is amazingly written. I loved it. It's amazing and it's very true about life and the way some people work. Great job 5/5

Wow, you're poem is incredible.
The words just flew right off of my
lips and you did an outstanding job
with this one. The flow was fantastic
and perfect. Nothing at all seemed to
be forced rhymed or any of the sort.
Well done.
I gave you a 5/5.
<3Tay

Wow, this is a very powerful poem. You described the feeling of every person in the poem really good. There's definately nothing wrong with it. I loved it. Definately on my favs. 5/5 Great job.

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Wow!!!! This is very emotional and amazingly written i mean alot of this is actually happening which is really depressing and your bring out that emotion of what is going on. I loved how you kept switching people that was a nice touch 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem I thought it was written very well. Although it was a bit long it keeps the reader hooked after everyline and leaves them wanting more. I liked the fact that you talked about different people from different backgrounds, I thought that was the best thing about the poem. Overall a fantastic job very unique and the title is perfect 5/5 GG23

This seems slightly cliche' and it lacked originality. perhaps you should broaden your vocabulary from words like

'fight' and 'tight'
but sometimes its not the words its how its presented.

There's the girl who has everything
Yet at night she listens to her parent's fight
Screaming, kicking, punching each other
She sits with tears in eyes closed so tight

i think you shouldve shortened the sentence

There's the girl who has everything
Yet she hears her parent's fight
Screaming, kicking, punching,
With tears in her eyes closed tight.

to me that sounds a bit better. just a suggestion take it or leave it. in the ned its your art. who am i to judge?

3.5

Absolutely fantastic.

Wow what a beautiful poem highlighting many many faces of human life. I love the flow of your poem and the word choice is superb I should say. Its very poetic and lexically strong :)
Love it

Tc
Fsams

I love it!!

This poem is so stong and you have a lot of discription I give it a 5/5 keep up the good work

I had to add this on my favorite poems list, it's absolutly breathtaking.
Your vocabulary is amazing and this peice is extremely emotional and I think it can relate to anyone who reads it.

Amazingly done sweetie!

Wow this is amazing....its true. you can never tell who a person realy is. even if you've known them for 10yrs...there is stuff they hide.....i am one of them....

When I read this title I was immediately interested for I love that line. But as I read the poem it developed it's own being...it seperated itself from the famous title. And then it was beautifully brought together at the end. Because as you think about the last line more and more you start reflecting on the attitudes of the ppl described and they truly are acting every day to hide all the pain...and everyone does it and yet no one understands it fully.
So in case you didn't catch on I LOVED this poem, LOL! Amazing job, keep it up :)! 5/5 without a doubt!
~Midnight Sun