A really good poem. Liked the subject as well as the choosing of words and flow. There is a lack of rhyming in this poem. I can tell that with matching rhyming this poem could be much better 4/5

This piece really moved me, thank you so much for submitting it in my contest! The imagery and eloquent language you use is beautiful, dark, and is what I enjoy reading the most.

I especially loved the beginning and the end
"graphite sighs and dark illusions"
and
"I dream in infrared, every night
... till my dreams become reality."
The way you incorporated the title into the piece without letting it dictate where exactly the poem would go was really brilliant. excellent work!