I really liked this poem. Some of the stanzas are too repeating and it's destroying the whole flow. Although that, the rhyming and structure were great. 4/5

Dark and sweet at the same time--a very difficult combination to achieve well! You have a way with words and with expressing yourself, it's really quite lovely. Keep up the good work and I hope to see you put more poems up because I love reading them!

This is a good poetry...ahaha