The poem sounded like a song, the way you wrote 'but now I am gone' was very creative. I thought that the first and second stanzas were the best, they had the most meaning.

Hey there i just wanted to know if you were referingto me in that poem becouse that is the way i see you, beautiful but scared to show your true self, let me know on msn, remember i love you and im going to keep pushing for us, ilove you