Aww this poem is really sad, but i can totally relate to it, not with my dad though, but with my mom. it was reallly good. 5/5

~Kristina

One word...WOW! sad but gr8 work...hope things wrk out 4 u :)
Xx...[retro babii]...xX

Wow
Great job
so sad :(
i give it a FIVE
woot!

I've been through that, and it sucks. love this poems 5/5

Hey,
a nice poem and unfortunately I know what you are talking about. i argue a lot with my mother, and I dont mean it.
the poem is a very good example of a poem that doesnt rhyme but with a nice flow. 5/5
kisses stephanie

Awww such a sad poem....im sorry. i could feel the emotion you put in this, and you wrote it very well. good job. 5/5

Excellent!

hmm?

For this one, I can really see your message. but I think this one have a lack of rhymes..but that for me..

keep it up!

I love this.

I was reading this thinking how many people will be able to relate to this write? I bet it's a hell of a lot.

Anyway. The emotion and depth you put into this piece were nicely done, easily felt by the reader, and I thoughted it flowed well throughout.

BABY, U GOTTA WORK THINGS OUT WITH UR DAD. JUST KNOW THAT U STILL HAVE ME OK.