Do I really Love You?
Love songs remind me of you all day,
But could they remind me of someone else if I went my own way?

I like that part. How true that is. So many confuse lust for love.
*ME*

Great write! the last stanza was a little.. shaky... but other than that, it was wonderful! i loved the repetition because it shows these thoughts running through your head.. great work! :D

Wow, very wondeful poem, i really like the way you asked those questions one after the other.....it's not wrong to ask yourself those questions i really don't consider it doubting but TESTING yourself and love for her

I absolutely loved this poem. Incredible read. The creativity is there. And the concept to this poem blew me away... I mean, I've never taken that perspective before...

Thank you- It means alot to me :)

Good job on this one .. not to read the other lol

Hey bro..dis is a really good write ..and all d things u do and day dream about her..shows u love her...and yeah u do!..ah anyways dude nice poem!.cant wait 4 d next part!!

That was very depressing.. T_T but I liked it! ^-^

Really good! Very true, very meaningful. The repitition was great. And I liked the last sentence about wondering why you would question it.

I just got over a relationship. (actually last night) so this hits hard with me. and i can feel every word.

very nice.

~Casey Jillian

I love this first part i cant wait to read the second

Nicely put. It flows very well, and I like the way you arranged your stanzas. 4/5.

-mandy :)

Omg i really liked this poem, it kinda had me thinking about somethings from the past. You write really good. Keep it up ;]

I think this could be a song. It's nice.

I love it! I can feel you put your emotion in it and it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend and my current boyfriend. 5/5! Can't wait to read the other one. Keep up the great work!!!

I realized while reading this poem that I often find myself asking these questions about my boyfriend. I can really relate to this poem and the flow is excellent. I did like the ending too because even though we all have doubts, you would think that if one was truly in love he/she wouldn't have to ask him/herself those questions. In all, an excellent read! I loved it!
LKR

DUdE!! That's such a great poem .. It rocks my effin socks

Hi dude..! I'd just like to say that if i could vote for u more than once, i would.. It's of the sweetest poems i've ever read! I was really moved by this poem.. Keep it up and good luck :-)
5/5