The Beauty of His Soul

by Mousie   Oct 30, 2007


I love not the beauty of the man,
But of his soul.
Gentle, yet yearning for such
His heart cries out.
I feel the passion of his touch
Slightly awakening me.
Waves which carved his body
Crash against my walls.
Awoken by a sea of tingles
Shivering down my spine.
Connected by all that is true
We meet again.
I love not the beauty of the man,
But of his soul.

bored in class, finally had inspiration. i was acutally reading essays by Emerson and just got some inspiration, don't ask how lol. hope you like it! you all know who this is about... ;)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very sweet poem written so nicely.
    wow dear you have amazed me again.
    now you are the best poet, keep it up cause we can always be better.
    a 5/5 as always cause you truly deserve it

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow darling.
    It was short, but quite amazing, eh.
    I loved how you changed the line making it a bit more fun to read. (:

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Very nice i really liked it , its so sweet, and its funny how it just came to you

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Aww.. great job with this! it had wonderful flow and word choice.. all in all it was just wonderful.. it is what every girl 'should' do when chosing a man.. look at his soul.. great message! keep it up! :o]

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Great poem, it's really nice. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

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