Comments : Searching My Dreams (Collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Everytime we write together you make me feel so good. I loved that you took time from your busy work load to write with me. Thank you for everything. You are indeed a very special man.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Nitin,

    I loved this beautiful poem you and Cindy made together.
    Keep up the good work,

    kindest regards,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I loved the sadness in this. Painful yet somehow hopeful. I've missed the collabs with you and Cindy. This should be in the top rated soon! Heh. =]] Take care and hope you're doing well.

    Always,
    Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Gosh...last stanza absolutely Rocked :'(
    beautiful Write Nitin, Missed your poems a lot
    I hope everythings goin Okay with you =]
    keep writing
    NemO xx

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nitin.....great job on the collab....like I told Cindy....hard to tell where one writer ends and the other begins....you two have really mastered the collab form....

    The last two verses for me were outstanding....especially like the line:

    "Leaving me like living clay"

    Keep 'em coming!....and hey....would love to see another Nitin solo too!....take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Jess

    I love this poem..... my favorite lines are....

    Searching this Earth dreaming of you
    Never quite being able to reach your side
    Screaming your name, only silence returned
    Scared and lonely since our love died

    it was so powerful... keep up the good work 5/5

    xoxox
    Jess

  • 16 years ago

    by kirsty

    Well done!
    This is simply beautiful. I love it =]
    5/5 work

  • 16 years ago

    by My Mistakes

    Great poem. would love if you can vote and comment my new poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Carley

    This is a great poem. i really enjoyed reading it. it explains what i felt wen i lost the one i love. keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Nitin, so happy to see you writing again.Its been long time and this is best way to return , writing with best writing partner.You and cindy always weave magic together through words.

    A fantastic write.The poem is so well displaying love and lost emotions. Really heartfelt write.

    Hope to see you two writing soon again.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very good.

    compliments to you!

  • 16 years ago

    by Janette Bradley

    Excellent. You've managed to write a poem thats both dark and beautiful at the same time!! A definite 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Great job with this piece 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikko McMorbid

    Loved it. (-_-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice job on this collab, I especially like the last stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    What a beautiful and heartbreaking poem... i especially love the last line. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Another beautiful deeply heartfelt poem girls, you two work so well together, I can't wait for the next piece, xox sam