How true and apt, monotony of 9-5 jobs, well written

Wow u just described my everyday feelings man,

WORK SUCKS!!!!

i loved the flow of this poem it made it so easy to read.

Well done

5/5

Gary

I think this poem has got real feeling behind it.

I love the wording and emotion you used.

Please keep writing!

5/5

Danielle
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I liked this poem..
Its really depressing though.. makes me not want to go to school now.. lol

I loved the wording, and how you expressed your emotion of such boredom and came up with a poem not boring at all.

5/5