Very good job on writing this Sammie =) The emotions were strong and heartfelt and the wording and flow were both fantastic =) A complete 5 on it and let me know when you write some more =)
~*Rhea*~

Wow this one if the best, i loved the last line about the clay, very true.....excelent 5/5

I'd love to say I can relate; But I can't. I wish I could have this relationship with my mother.... Nice poem, had a good flow to it all; Check out some of mine =] 5/5

The subject and word choice of this opem is very good. the rythm could be improved in the last line, but other than that, great job! i cant relate as much as i'd like, but its still a very nice poem

I loved this,
it's so true
i never missed my mother
untill i had to bury her.

Its good, and i like it...ill give u a 5,
iys a very ture poems,
its cool, i cant wait for more!

Wow, thats like a very ahmazing poem. i {heart} it muchly! 5/5 :)