Debbie
What a wonderful Sonnet. Everything you write is so beautiful.

O happy dagger! Greet me as I rise
Thy liar's bite a welcome warm embrace
Drop by glorious drop contentment sighs
As peace and beauty mask a weary face

The emotions that come from this piece are over whelming, Loved this stanza.
Excellent Job! ~Bravo~
Love Cindy

Oh so wonderful.......awesome and beautiful
like a dream come true

10/5....the poems alright too...

Wonderfully Penned, Bravo!!!

Oh man Debbie, this has got to be one of the most amazing poems I have read. Such wonderful work here. Very Shakespearanish. You have done an amazing job. Very beautiful.

I think I may well have entered the very same contest, you shone above the rest with this piece. Truly grasped the Elizabethan tongue as though it were second nature. One thing I noticed while writing mine was just how difficult it is to portray todays speech into Elizabethan, you do this so effortlessly in this piece.

I have been trying my damnest to find a flaw .. just so that I have something to critique and I simply cannot find one.

Any writer would be glad to have this masterpiece in their back catalogue.

~Pete.